The tone is perfect. Still need to go a little slower and develop those lines. I'd kick it back 10-15 bpm and see if that gives you a little more time to really carve out your lines and give them more pronounced meaning. The actual content of the solo is quite good, but it sounds as if your trying to say too much too fast. Slow it down, and take your time. Good stuff Sid! 

sallan

I kinda 90% liked the tone - just a bit muffled I thought. If that's the direction you're heading, try this site: http://www.jazzguitar.be/forum/

BTW: Thanks for the tip about the Robby Ameen album. I love it.

Thanks guys :)

@Sallan: Thanks so much for the link you sent me, I've started using those fragments ( and fragments of those fragments) a lot in my playing. I did find that I couldn't quite manage the tempo of the song. A few bpm less could have made a world of a difference, come to think of it.

@farmduck/farlow: I've used jazzguitar.be  before. Great site. Never used the forum though. Is it any good? ( you know how some forums can be). Thanks for your feedback :)

DUDE, you should have warned me it is jazz :-/ 

Bearing in mind that jazz like this makes me want to kill myself, the tune is tolerable. Beyond that, I'm not qualified to comment.

Sidd: that forum is very good, especially the Chords and Improvisation sections.

There was a discussion there about a Pat Martino vid where Pat showed 5 different Min7 arpeggios he used over an A7#5 chord - Bbm7, Dbm7 and 3 others. When you think how easy to play Min7 arps are, it's a handy way to get 5 extra riffs for one chord.

Sid,

I'm probably gonna put out a little noodle using the same fragment lesson, only I'm going to do mine on tenor, and I'm going to run it over a tune of some sort. 

Here's the lesson for those that are interested. It's such a compact and fruit filled lesson, if you are into jazz, this will help you. 

http://www.opus28.co.uk/bebopperp.pdf