It's a fitting name.

The squeaks (for lack of a better word) should be lower in volume I think. Other than that the tune is rather out of my comfort zone as a listener.

it was good

I liked it. If I were making a movie, it sounds like something I would use for a soundtrack for someone who is deep in thought, or a scene where days, or months go by. I liked the lead. It sounds like you had a delay, reverb, and distortion, and it sounded beefy, like you were using a humbucker set on neck pickup. That may not be the case, but that's how I pictured it. Nice work!

I smoked an lsd spliff once that sounded like that, groovy. the swells are a bit loud but they add to the atmosphere. cool sounds, I like it....

Cool.
Thanks for the comments.

hey man

i think it was pretty cool... i'd get rid of the drum part if it were me though... everything else seems to be relatively free form, and the beat the drum creates leaves me wanting everything to align... so you'd need to either tighten everything up, or treat the drums with the same floaty attitude the guitars have

you could throw some big reverbs on the kit and just manually play it in... like a big kick "BOOOMmmmmmmmmmmmmm"
then a snare "CRACKkkkkkkkkkkkk"

It just fights itself a little, but nice tones and harmonies dude

i'll second the drum suggestion. it clashes big time.....for drums i would use a much slower beat and a bit emptier sounding beat as well. think pink floyd......where you have slow drums come in only on certain spots like when the lead starts up.