well the timing is way off form the rythm track. and the rifs are very repetative. the video quality is very poor. but i have the same problem with my video. seems they need to make a freaking camera that can keep up with the speed. i have yet to find such a device. it's frustrating....

you should try to slow down a bit and try to stay right on the beat. playing to a metronome isn't a bad idea either. it will help you develop that sense of timing.....without that timing ,whatever you play will sound very random.

it wasn't the worst yet not the best either it just seemed "off" and open ended

I would slow down and build your speed slowly, but with more attention to accuracy, and timing. Better for a player to hit the notes slower and cleaner, than fast and sloppy. I agree with bachmirage, a metronome would be very helpful. You might also want to type "sweep picking" on youtube just to get some ideas. As for the solo itself, I think your getting there. It just takes time and practice. Good luck!

thanks. i know the video had bad quality but i was worried about the sound. i'll work on all that. i'm 13 and i just wanted to know how good i really am. i'll repost this when i edit it.

well keep plugging away. it takes time but with steady practice, you'll get where ya want to be........