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Original message:188 days 17 hours 25 minutes ago
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Member: Ben Massine
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Okay... so i have been trying to write a song but it doesn't sound good because the different parts like the verse chourus and intro don't sound good together. Does anyone have any advice?
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Reply:188 days 16 hours 11 minutes ago
Member: shanejohnson2002
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Write down what you have and save it for later. Your might write something later that fits better, and you can dig up your old stuff easily that way.
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Reply:188 days 14 hours 49 minutes ago
Member: Sully
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You want some advice. Well, when i write, I personally cant. What I mean is if i try to nothing happens. No-Flow. But if Im chillen, or with my friends It comes out of no where, really good songs to (in my opinion). So, dont try SO hard, youll get stressed out, and then crumble it up and throw it away. Like above Save it. It will come to you, if not. Start a new song.
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Reply:181 days 6 hours 17 minutes ago
Member: Mike Hammond
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I think I'd try to keep the lyrics as simple as possible, but not lose any of the message I was trying to say. Sometimes it'll help to make the chords and notes fit together with them more easily. but then again, trying to write a song would be kind of like trying to write a novel. Best of luck.
Reply:181 days 6 hours 11 minutes ago
Member: Hippieway
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I agree with the above you may not have a song you mayy have parts of two or three songs. I have never felt that I had to have a tune done today, sometimes and some tunes just don't come together like that.
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Reply:181 days 3 hours 39 minutes ago
Member: Evil Kitty
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You could also need "bridge" sections to go in between the parts, could be the parts are in different keys - could be alot of things.
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